The Note

Very depressing... not my best piece of work with rhyming but it's something

Tear stains streak down her angel-like face
As she sits in the dark of her room
Holding herself together wanting to scream
But falling apart at the seams
Secretly wishing she could die
All because of their lies

She asks herself softly
"Why am I not good enough?"

Days of sleepless nights haunt her eyes
As she walks through another day of lifelessness
This is the mask she provides
To hide the scars on the inside
Secretly wishing she would die
All because of their lies

As she asks herself softly
"Why am I not good enough?"

Silently sitting, home all alone
Empty feelings inside her
Holding the drugs in her hand
Something no one would understand
Secretly wanting to die
All because of their stupid lies

Softly she asks herself
"Why am I not good enough?"

She takes each pill one at a time
As she waits silently for it all to be over
And this is how her story will end
All because of her so called friends
No longer wishing to die
All because of all their dumb lies

The note beside her asking
"Am I good enough now?"

Reviews

[Legion]

Well, rhyming or not, this is very good (as sad as it is). I think it would make for a good song as well. Kudos.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Dark...but poignant. All to often, people adopt the words of others as their own regardless of their true thoughts - lies which often hurt those in proximity to them.