Serene Fate

Serene Fate

A Poem by XxMoonLightxX
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written about my anth♥

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I�d give up forever to see you,
If it means all disaster then fine,
Whenever I�m with you I�m flying
My emotions so intense,
Like love and hate together combined,

When I look in your eyes,
I see all I can be,
Everything I have ever wanted,
My true destiny,

Such a gorgeous smile,
Baby, you are my world,
You�re the closest to heaven I�ll ever be,
My everyday hero,
The savior of what use to be a broken girl,

I love the taste of your gentle, sweet kiss,
I can�t believe this is real,
Just all together letting go,
Letting serene fate take life�s wheel

© 2008 XxMoonLightxX


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I really like this one, not as depressing as some of your others. I think you put real effort into this one and it shows. It has good flow, rhyming and a story to it. I especially liked "letting serene fate take lifes wheel", thought that was a pretty impressive thought. Good job. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 18, 2008

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I don't write as much as I use to though i wish i could.. i've been having a mental block for a while, squeezing out a few good poems every now and again. Yes most of my poetry is depressing but on so.. more..

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