Broken Girl

Torn apart inside
to myself I should never have lied
there is no more hope for me
my life is a waste of time and peace

just let me die
not like you care that I cry
you hate me I might as well accept
Its all my fault I must regret

My heart still burns
because I�m never going to learn
I�m just standing out in the pouring rain
bearing all the pain

standing all alone
now I know I�m on my own
you broke my heart
ripped my world completely apart

why should I go through everyday
living on the words you may never say
paying for my unforgivable mistake
and this is my only escape

so I hold the knife high above my head
I hope you will remember me when I�m dead
goodbye cruel and heartless world
This is the ending chapter of a broken girl

Author's Note

what do you think overall?

Reviews

[ellie]

i luv this poem?

[Windy]

Well, first I hope this isn't about you!! Overall I thought it was pretty good. I admit I am no poet by I know what I like to read and this was one. Though it is sad it is written well and flows well had good rhyme and is descriptive and believable. Hope that wasn't more info than you wanted! lol good job :)