Before The Light Of Day, We'll Dance The Night Away

My hands on your hips, your lips against my neck

Your arms over my shoulders, my chest against your breast

My heart in sync with yours, your hearts in sync with mine

All we have is you and I, and You and I have time.

 

Your lips, pressed against, my lips, I can barely hold my breath

So suffocate me with your love, and love me into death

Now we hold each other closer, Are hands held tight

Before the morning comes, we'll dance into the night.

 

The night now has passed, as we sit and watch the sun

Arrive over the horizon, the day has just begun.

Off with are shoes and clothes, are bodies made for heat

So in are dreams we dance till dawn, to the rhythm...are heart beats.

Author's Note

Wrote it on the plane to Cali. :P

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Haha you wrote it on the plain to MY DOMAIN! haha sorry I'm in cali . :-p

Okay back to the poem lol. OH MY GOSH!! I LOVED IT!! my favorite lines were
"Your lips, pressed against, my lips, I can barely hold my breath
So suffocate me with your love, and love me into death"

and this
"So in are dreams we dance till dawn, to the rhythm...are heart beats."

Okay this poem was not only filled with love and imagery but it had that almost erotic effect. It was like those heated passionate moments you share with your love that only come around every once in awhile. I loved every minute of this poem. Magnificent!

[Jacqueline]

This poem is great.
I love the image it gives and the emotion it represents.
Brilliant. =]

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow... this is so sweet.... Made my heart beat... lol... This is very good, your descriptions are very good... The beat was pretty much amazing and i really enjoyed how it was not only romantic but kind of sensual... This is a Great Piece... Good Job!!!

[John Stussy]

This really makes me think of my girlfriend, dancing the night away with her. Thanks for posting this so all of us could enjoy it.

[~D.A. Phoenix~]

Well isn't this just romantic. lol i like it. The rhythm is really nice