How Much I Need You

Truly I am lonely
I am hurting so much inside
I need you, i really need you
To become part of my life

I am the bird with broken wings
I am the clock no longer ticking
I am the tree with the withered leaves
I am the dove, no longer singing

I need you to tend to my wounds
Please, revive this tormented soul
For I wish i could love you
But the world, may never know

I am the flower with no sun to bathe
I am the the fish with no lake
I am the puzzle missing its piece
I am the tongue with no taste

I hope the day will come
When I find my angel above
Because oh how i wish you could love me
Because you, I can never love

broken.....

Author's Note

All reviews are appreciated....(Just a constant spilling of emotions, nothing else)

Reviews

[Kal]

man beautiful!
i loved how you described the pain with such beautiful words...
nice man...

[EliJoLee]

wowow.
very deep and very passionate.
loved every word of it.
we all need to spill emotions sometime.
great read!

[Mr. Deft Diction]

I am the tongue with no taste. That's such a strong, emotional description. Nice.

[closed account]

this was great!! but you are a poet with words!!!! :-)

[Mariah]

i really love this one. :)
miss you. !

[~D.A. Phoenix~]

I can't really say anything that hasn't already but i feel that i must add my two cents. Ok here goes: It rhymes :P lol

[Alexis Pena (Goco)]

this poem has a nice rhythm, and a sense of rhyme

[Robert Luna]

For we as human feel this loneliness of feeling incomplete and un-whole. Your words speak from the heart and truly long to be heard. I felt the strength and truth they were written with. Very impressive out pouring of the soul here my friend

[-!katie!-]

this is amazing. i know the feeling ):

[Jazmyne]

this has sad emotion written all over it. it says how you want this person to give you everything b/c with out them you are nothing but in the end you cant love them. good job! i like this one....very well expressed!