Free Of Tears

Produced within your mind

Pain slowly nurtures the seed of anguish

Planted deep inside the core of the human heart

Watered by blood and misery

Slowly it outgrows its host

The pain becomes more inflicted

Agony times a thousand fold

The cringed face of the victim

Premature no longer

The seed has grown

The heart is left with scars

Ripping through the chest of its victim

Up onto the throat

The victim chokes

No longer is the resistance commencing

All hope is lost

The plant becomes a tree

Ripping and manifesting

Corrupting the mind

It bears fruit on its leaves

Emotion sways the branches of the parasite

As the fruit slowly dangles from it's branch

One drops in the form of tears

Beneath the eyes of the cringed face

As emotion no longer sways the branches

But shake the tree from its foundation

The tree is stripped dry of its fruit

And the victim is now a free soul

Free of tears and free of pain

Even though the heart

Is left with scars

 

Never be afraid to cry

 

Reviews

[Str8jacket]

I agree with my friend. I think it's really powerful. I think that many people can relate (I know I can) and take a lot away from it. Once again you've left me with a lot to think about.

" The pain becomes more inflicted

Agony times a thousand fold

The cringed face of the victim

Premature no longer

The seed has grown

The heart is left with scars"

I think those are my favorite lines. Like always I say keep writing because you have talent.

[PhoeniX]

oh wonderful! i love your work. such a deep and profound way to explain pain. gosh i dont have words to explain how great this was. the descriptions were amazing. awesome!!!!

[luthien7]

beautifully dark - and release. I really like this.

[Str8jacket]

did you make the picture yourself? I just noticed the tiny print on the one side too. It says love you and then some some love stuff in spanish (can't be too sure exactly what it says because the print is so tiny)... I have good eyes. lol.

[~D.A. Phoenix~]

Wow i think this is one of the most powerful pieces i've ever read. good job. it's beautifully sad