Judgement

Who am I to judge, as these hands were to create
Wove webs of reality, threads of common fate
Crafted valleys of despair, and seas of wealth
Who am I to judge, but only myself

I look at my creation, as I marvel at their whim
Shadows of fear take place, as they fear not me but sin
They use me as excuses, and yet I hold no grudge
And yet I ask myself, who am I to judge

I hold my last breath, as depression seeks my skies
Rain and storms fall, as tears leak from my eyes
Earthquakes shake the earth, as I take my final stand
Who am I to judge, but the world of man

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Str8jacket]

Wow. I think this is a really great piece of work. It was so eloquent and more beautiful than anything my mind could produce. The flow of your words are strong and add so much. We often ask ourselves the question "who am I to judge?" because often so many have it worse off and yet most people judge anyway. I find this also a thought provoking piece. good job.

[Legion]

as I marvel at there whim - "there" or did you mean "their"?

Great piece from the perspective of the Almighty. Maybe we should all judge humanity. We have done so much to mess things up. Great work.