Be You

Instead of watching presentations Monday in core i decided to write. This is what I came up with. Sorry if it's not great, it was just a quick write.

Hey girl,
such a beautiful girl,
  sitting lonely in your sad world.
I would be happy if you were.
But sadness seems to flow right through your veins.
It saddens me; your so mistreated,
I wish you can open up your eyes and see this.
From my perspective your so mislead
not a single thought floats into your head.


Hey girl, what do you say?
If I save you from all this pain?
Take you to a place so far from here.
Oh take you to a place you wouldn't have to fear.
Just make you happy,
Oh so happy.

Hey boy,
pretty boy.
I see your not respected for your choice.
They say your confused about your sexuality,
but they just say that because their cruel.
But don't let those cold hearted people get the best of you.
just don't care what they say.
You know their just talking from a hidden pain.

Oh pretty boy,
I see your pain.
You hide it so well but its still there.
I accept you for who you really are and so do others.

Their just bump in your road.
Just a crack in your smile.
Don't let them bully you.
Stand up for what you believe.
Don't let them take you down
their just obscure about themselves.

Hey girl, what do you say?
If I save you from all this pain?
Take you to a place so far from here.
Oh take you to a place you wouldn't have to fear.
Just make you happy,
Oh so happy.

Oh pretty boy,
I see your pain.
You hide it so well but its still there.
I accept you for who you really are and so do others.

Your just so perfect when your being you.

Reviews

[India Brooks]

"Just don't care what they say.
You know their just talking from a hidden pain."
^^^
I liked this line :)
Very nice with such fine emotion. Well done. :)

[KaylaRose]

woops, didn't notice it when I wrote it

They're* just bump in your road.


Just a crack in your smile.