three complicated words

three complicated words

A Poem by Faith

You stole what i thought was taken

An unexpected surprise

I feel, what i thought was lost

It's hard for me to say the words,

           the words i can't admit

Yet, at times i scream them in my head

I'm afraid,

          afraid to lose one that isn't mine

I hear the words,

         "i love you" he says

I hesitate,

        "ditto" i reply.

 

 

© 2009 Faith


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Yes, it can be extremely difficult to utter such powerful words. In admitting such raw emotion, there comes a period in which an individual becomes vulnerable... and more often than not, that vulnerability is unsettling. Good write!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is one of my favorites of you,

Showing the tension in a relationship you want to end but you are too terrified to do so.

Very good

'Ditto, I reply'

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome. Really good descriptions. yeah, i love you is a complicated phrase.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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