A Passenger

A Passenger

A Poem by Aries


The brakes are cut and knuckles can blanch 
 on the staunch grip that careens towards something
neither here nor there nor in-between

unsure as I am

Your windows are tinted and the keys to your thoughts
lay not in my pocket, but your own

Secrecy can breed uncertainty
in teeming maladies within

So SCREAM for me to save you
if eyes trembling with the radiance of a mind witnessing its last lunacy 
go out like headlights plunged into the river's rocky maw

Our final moments could be intimate
like they were the firmament's parting gift
to an abundance of hungry water below
and to a God not sated

only silence

© 2012 Aries


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"secrecy can breed uncertainty in teeming maladies within" I just love this bit it's so powerful and the word "maladies" just makes me want to dig into those words deeper , secrets in a relationship of any kind will only pull it down. a wonderful piece of art , bravo XD XD XD XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aries

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate your time :)

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Added on March 3, 2012
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Aries
Aries

Corinth, NY



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