Supercell to F5, False Hope

here comes the storm

 
you are the inevitable gale that uproots
empty bags dust devils and tenuous hope
you are the final violent truth
that scours my soul with blight and smoke
but dizzying still I see your ghost
in passing cars and old parking spots
in empty bedrooms and parking lots
amid rumors that you never left
a high-wind advisory is in effect

Reviews

[B]

I guess one can experience a good love
and a bad one
the bad one leaves you empty and abused
and the good one fills you with hope

I enjoyed reading this poem
Good job

[Aries]

Hope is a slippery slope.. a little bit will help you through but the disappointment of failure can be the tree at the bottom of the hill waking in your path..Thank you for your time. I appreciate the review and kind words