Love?

Warm fingers tracing my back,

Tickling my spine,

Making the appearance of goosebumps well known.

Your touch is so warm, and inviting.

So welcoming and loving, but

Is it too soon to call it love??

Author's Note

Not really a poem. I don't know what to call this art work actually! :D

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

lol I would cal it: "Why do you have to be 16 and write something that is absolutely beautiful and inviting like your first 3 sentences?" Nope.... That's probably too long. Yup!! Too long, for sure, I think. It is NOT to soon. I think feelings are.... feelings. You don't escape them and they prove to be exhausting when trying to flee them. It matters none if you practice to run all the time or feel cheated out of it, but Love is Love and FEELS like Love when it is..... when it's what?! lol *Big Hugzz* I have a story that I wrote for someone who wanted to read something of the like that you have written here, and if you find my YouTube "handle" ...darkmark7732... in that site's search bar, you will see a "story" called Poems by Fire. It's the longer version of what you have written here. Not hearing me read it to you is a lot better. Trust me! lol It's on this site as well. : ) Beautiful, Makayla...... xoxo -Mark