Only Hero

A person can only go so far

To save someone.

But what if saving them,

Puts you up for total damnation?

And everything you have, just disappears.

Would you take the risk?

Would you save them?

Or just let them fall?

Would you be there for them in the end?

Or would you burn up in the flames,

Meant for them?

Take the risk.

Because YOU might be THEIR

Only Hero.. <3

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

My goodness!! I just wanted to read a poem after reading your profile and freakin' adorable "Woop! Woop!" lol, and then I read a poem that first reads like a list of emotions that you are dealing with to make sense of, and then BAM! Your last few lines are so deep that it proves to be selfish to not spend time with you and tell you how beautifully open and wonderful that advice is. I Love the form of your poem as it tapers of like such and I think the second half of the poem was pictured that way when writing it, but the whole of the poem is awesome!! The beginning of your poem is great for an introduction to becoming involved with the sincerity of the project, and in the middle where you ask the questions..... I like it. It is as if you are having a one-sided conversation with yourself in a bit of practice to give to someone it was meant for to hear. Beautiful, Makayla... xoxo -Mark