Surreal

Surreal

A Poem by Mimi Vanity

Give me a reason, and I'll tell you no lies

My lips say one thing, but look in my eyes

I'm afraid to let go; to trust, to believe

But slowly I start to, no will to decieve.

You chased away the darkness, my light shinging bright.

The last thing on my mind, a sweet dream in the night.

The stars in the sky and the sun in the day

Dull in comparison when you look my way

These's words, they're indequate, can't say how I feel

I hope this dream never ends,

It's so perfect... Surreal.

© 2011 Mimi Vanity


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Hmmm.. How about titling it "The Dream"? Nicely written

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on November 18, 2010
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Mimi Vanity
Mimi Vanity

Centralia, PA



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