Immurement

Immurement

A Poem by Mimi Vanity
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Does this suck? im not sure. I want to add more & change it , but I need feedback...

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I'm
Shut in
No way out from your walls
No where to to turn;
If I try then I'll fall
I want to escape
But
Alone, I will wait
Trapped within these walls.
Someday you may see
But I know you
Wont
Believe in me
You just don't
Understand how it feels
Waiting
Wounds overtime will heal
bBut that doesn't stop my mind from illustrating
Everything that we've been through
Am I enough? or...
Love.

© 2011 Mimi Vanity


Author's Note

Mimi Vanity
Immure - to imprison; to shut in

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Added on October 15, 2010
Last Updated on March 4, 2011

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Mimi Vanity
Mimi Vanity

Centralia, PA



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