Through my eyes

Through my eyes I see you die
Through my eyes I see you cry
Through my eyes I see you in pain

Cutting from all the things you've seen
Leaving marks to be untouched by your cold hands
As these wounds heal they leave scars behind
Of you

You were the one that caused all this pain
You were the one that put these cuts on me
You were the one that makes me want to cry

Because in the end you are the one
That sees me die inside
This is how i see myself through my eyes

 

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

The title is just right for this poem, you have a natural way with words. Many good lines in this piece,
you get the depth of feeling across to the reader very well.

[Alaina]

Wow, this is good i really, like it!
its conveyed nicely and has a nice flow. My favourite line:"This is how i see myself through my eyes:
Its a great closing line.
Love it!
Thanx for sharing!
- keep up the great work