The Littlest Things

The Littlest Things

A Poem by Andrianna

I sit alone as I wrap my wings
waiting for what this world brings
My wings burn in flames..
..as I go through lives games..
burned by the pain of the littlest things

© 2011 Andrianna


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Short and sweet I really liked this poem it emits strong emotion from so few lines my only wish is that it was longer the colour is also quite captivating and a nice touch a slight grammatical error on the last line unless that's intentional to which I do apologise but I will defiantly be looking out for your future works

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Seems shameful haha, but what do i know haha! I gotta like it haha!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and sweet I really liked this poem it emits strong emotion from so few lines my only wish is that it was longer the colour is also quite captivating and a nice touch a slight grammatical error on the last line unless that's intentional to which I do apologise but I will defiantly be looking out for your future works

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 18, 2011
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Andrianna
Andrianna

Stevens Point, WI



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I have always loved to write. I am a young single parent to a 5 year old little boy! So it can be hard at times to really concentrate on my writing.. but I want to make time. Writing will help me.. more..

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