Corners and Walls

Corners and Walls

A Story by Neroscuro
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Is this a dream or a nightmare?

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This girl… she’s beautiful. She took me by the hand and led me through corridors. Am I insane?


The corners are tied up to her dress and the walls all reflect our consciousness. The roof is falling down but no boulder can hurt me. Then the sky tears open and a blinding light emits a sound, but is too loud to hear. The girl is covered with this holy light and I am left in the dark, blind. The girl then turns and tells me her name, but it was too terrible to remember. She then pushed me and I woke up. Was this a dream or a nightmare?


A nightmare, for the girl’s name was Death. And it isn’t over; she’s staring at me waiting for me to make a move. Her eyes are beautiful and seducing. Temptation is taking over. 

© 2010 Neroscuro


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Wow.... I really liked the way you described the scene your dream took place in. You really have a way with words when it came to describing the way her eyes were, and I really enjoyed this piece of writing. (:

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Neroscuro
Neroscuro

Colombia



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I don't know what to write here. It's devastating, so I'll just start with the facts. I'm Colombian (Nice country, and not all that guerilla and cocaine ridden as so many people think), I'm funny yet .. more..

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