Losing the Grasp

Losing the Grasp

A Poem by Neroscuro
"

We are losing the grasp of reality: love.

"

Welcome to our battle pit,
Did you already lose hope
Of searching for even the dimmest light,
In a world as dark as night?
Night itself.


We’ve ran to the horizon,
Trying Hard,
Searching Far,
For a spark.


But you cannot light ice,
It will only escape,
From the grasp.

They’ve lost the grasp…


…Of Reality: Love.


...Only hatred sails through their veins.


They’re losing the grasp.
Bring them back, show them the way.


No!


You cannot teach a deaf to
Listen.

© 2010 Neroscuro


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I liked this ^^ It flowed rather well... There's only one teeny tiny mistake where you put "lost" instead of "lose" at least, I presume it was a mistake. You may have meant to put lost, however, it doesn't seem to make sense...
Other than that though, a fantastically well written poem ^^ And welcome to writers cafe!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked this ^^ It flowed rather well... There's only one teeny tiny mistake where you put "lost" instead of "lose" at least, I presume it was a mistake. You may have meant to put lost, however, it doesn't seem to make sense...
Other than that though, a fantastically well written poem ^^ And welcome to writers cafe!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neroscuro
Neroscuro

Colombia



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I don't know what to write here. It's devastating, so I'll just start with the facts. I'm Colombian (Nice country, and not all that guerilla and cocaine ridden as so many people think), I'm funny yet .. more..

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