x- My Broken Wings -x

I was 14 and I made a mistake and obviously deeply regretted it. Here's the apology and explanation in a dramatic way to the person I hurt.

Look at these broken wings,
Which were once meant to fly.
I reached heights where no one ever tried.
Sprinkling on me the dust,
A soul helped me fly.
The soul brought me happiness.

Now only left with broken wings,
I cry and I cry.

Don’t deserve to be destroyed,
Don’t deserve not to fly.
Don’t deserve a dying heart,
Don’t deserve my wings to be ripped apart.

It may seem desperate,
But not quite.
I want my wings,
But don’t want them though.

Those eyes filled with shame,
Looks at the world pass by.
Sits in one corner,
And no one says nay.

Tears been controlled,
But not anymore.
A wet face and a heart so sore.
Trying to hide the pain,
But only too late.
Now realizing I got a heartache.

Tell me what I did is forgotten,
Once again things will seem to happen.
Just waiting for a move,
And finally life will continue.

Atleast the light still stays,
Atleast your heart still says,
You understand me.
You want me to fly.
But I’m still waiting for your reply.


-aki.

Reviews

[ALEW]

This has a really nice flow. I really enjoyed it. Forgive the many reviews from me that you'll wake up to find, I just really like your writing and have to catch up.

[x-aki-x]

Thankyou Crystal! :)

[Crystal Marie Rome]

Really beautiful poem. The flow together so well. Do your best! =)