The Friend

She was willing to care about him

Even when he went insane

She listened to his troubles

 Even about the girl with whom he fell in love

The girl who saw him as only a friend

That he would give his life to help.

Yet, she still listened about it.

 

She listened to it all

She gave him advice about the girl

And tried to see it all

She listened to his troubles

Even when he was down

Yet, when She needed help

He could only watch

 

He knew not what to do

As she started to waste away

She started to die within herself

And to fade away

He tried what he knew

But it didn’t work

There were other things against it

 

She had given up hope, for one boy

That she loved More than any

He left her, and said nothing

And she felt like she lost her feet.

She felt the world crumple around

Like a shelf falling on your head

With fragile hope tumbling on

And then it is gone

Reviews

[Alex Ryder]

Pretty freaking awesome, especially considering you're writing about someone who's not all that interesting. You make me sound pretty cool :) But it's an awesome poem.

[Wyatt]

you are epicly awesome, dont kid yourself.

[Alex Ryder]

:) Thank you.

[Alex Ryder]

*She had given up hope, for one boy/ That she loved MORE than any.

[Alex Ryder]

Only one correction i had to make.