Edge of Reality

Sitting on the outskirts of sanity

but still within view of life

evaluating the days that pass,

as life goes by on the edge of reality

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another piece packed with feeling and emotional struggle. Might review use of 'life' twice?

[Willard Wells]

Thanks for the visit and I have been working on the life issue, but nothing makes me happy beyond "life" yet.

[Hebe]

That is so true.... love that it's short but you get the full meaning and effect!

[Willard Wells]

I may work on the edge of darkness, but I try to keep it positive. Thanks for stopping by.

[Valentine]

I think we all have days where we are doing exactly that. Cute way to describe it. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

I considered it an observation but some that I have talked to considered it dark. I guess the level of darkness is different for some people. I greatly appreciate your time spent with my words.

[Lorry]

Sometimes that ledge can feel safe, away from everyone and all the problems life brings, or sometimes it is the worst nightmare, with barely room for a toe hold. Sometimes it is just good to observe and realise that the only real surprise is how there aren't more people up on that ledge with you, as you look down on man made bedlam at it's best/worst. Powerful words, felt.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your time and words. Glad you found something to review.