Island Love

For my friend Mike

standing on the shore

waves gently flow across sand

squeezed between my toes

strolling hand in hand in love

shes stolen my heart and soul

Reviews

[Tiana]

simply beautiful, Willard ...

[Willard Wells]

All you island girls give me inspiration. Thank you for visiting and you kind words.

[sansrity sinha]

nice and sweet..beautiful piece of work..
good job

[Willard Wells]

I appreciate the kind words and the time in visiting my work. I am so glad you liked it.

[David Scott]

Reads like a greeting card Will. In a good way. I could picture the scene well.

[Willard Wells]

Bahaha. Often when I write, I feel I should just get a job as a greeting card writer since my short verse seems to work. I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for your time in reviewing my work.

[Ardra]

The best thing being in sea shore with loved one sea and love both runs deep very beautifully expressed :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my work. I am glad you liked it.

[barleygirl]

I love the way your chosen font reminds us of the very gentle waves you describe. I love the way your observations are very tactile & specific, which helps us really see & feel everything you're feeling in this poem. I love the way this says so much in so few words . . . the mark of a master!

[Willard Wells]

I appreciate the kind words, along with your taking time to review my work. I am so happy you enjoyed my work. Thank you so much.

[softlyfall]

I think you have perfected this, perfected the expression of an already perfect thought, that is.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words. I write feelings more than form. Appreciated.