Missing Child

Lost to world

Leaving me empty

then searching to reach my bright

star in heavens dark

brightness in my soul fading

reaching out to hold her now

but alas she's out of reach

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very emotion filled and deep piece.
Says so much in such a short piece.
Wanting, and reaching out to someone who is no longer there.
Sad but moving little poem.
Well written :)

[Willard Wells]

She is not gone except in my life at this point, but of course, it does feel and come across as her being gone. I do still have hopes of us spending time in the future. Thank you for reading and your kind words.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

oh I see. I'm sorry she is not in your life at the moment.
your welcome :0

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I'm on the other side of this mirror, searching for my bright star in heaven's dark, having never felt his brightness on this earth. I am the daughter ever searching for her dad, the man I built into a hero. It's a treasure for me to know that a father can feel the same. God bless.

[Willard Wells]

Your search seems further than mine. As I have knowledge of where and sometimes a passing note, so I still hold out hope, but no matter, the love is forever. Thank you and peace out.

[emmajoy]

Such a beautiful sadness... sigh.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words.