Moment

Know where you are

Our past is just that,

it cannot be changed.

Our future has not arrived

so we do not know what life may bring.

All we truly have in life, is this very moment.

No future, no past.

Just this moment in time to savor.

Knowing your life you control right now.

So each day look in the mirror,

say well done, I have done well.

Your past and your future at this moment do not exist.

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

SPLENDID ! I always live in the moment.
I love your poem and the subtle feelings it evokes. Great Work !!!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Maria. I appreciate your visit and your kind words.

[Solar]

'So each day look in the mirror,
say well done, I have done well.

Your past and your future at this moment do not exist.'

I have always found such observations make one reflect that the past shapes us [that is life] but the present is the gift of a choice of attitude and that can change the future direction.

[Willard Wells]

I agree the past is what shapes us and we have to accept it for what it is and move on, good or bad. But as we choose a new path we must first be in the moment or we will not reach the future.

Appreciate your slipping by and commenting on my work.

[Solar]

The sad thing is that often people are not able to make that cognitive shift - so your poem is a timely reminder.

[Willard Wells]

I have a friend in a transitional state and this was about not being able to look at himself in the mirror, due to his own self-loathing of himself. The only chance out of that place is a moment at a time. Some are in such a dark place they never come back. Very sad.

[Solar]

And unfortunately those who try and help get get drained or sucked into their narrative. I am sure you did the right thing - help in whatever way one can.

[Willard Wells]

I have worked with persons with differing issues of mental and addictive issues. I have trained people to do this. The number one and first thing to teach is non-judgemental and no personal possession of the other person's issues. No one can be saved. Only the tools and information can be provided. The final outcome is totally in the hands of the individual.

[Solar]

Indeed. And each has his/her path to forge - in the big picture of shadows and light. And writing can be a tool in the process.

[Mary Helda]

You are right..we have to always live in the moment and get so much joy from it.. but also hope that the future brings more joy.. well written:-)

[Willard Wells]

Hope for the future is good and as it should be. But you must live in the moment, it is all you really have. Thank you, Mary, for dropping in and viewing my words. I appreciate your comments.

[Mary Helda]

yes..definately..you are welcome:-)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, being in the moment is a safe place to be. And how true, the past and fear of the future can be so very damaging to a person. Love your poem (really do!)

[Willard Wells]

I appreciate your kind words and taking time to visit my work.

[B. Boileau]

Written like a man in tune !! what's the saying ? live for today , for there may not be a tomorrow?
you've worded if perfectly !


bill

[Willard Wells]

Well, there is that, but I like a larger view often, but for some it is better to stay in the moment until their life settles into a safe and comfortable place. More controlled, you might say.

Thank you for stopping by and your kind words.

[Relic]

I agree, we are always in the here and now. I've heard it said many times, take life one day at a time. That's what I try to do. A good poem with a good message Willard.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you, Relic. Appreciate your crus'in by and viewing my words.

[Samuel Dickens]

All so true. Never should we fret about tomorrow, but live in the moment.

[Willard Wells]

Yes Samuel and thank you for stopping by.

[David Scott]

A topic I focus on daily. I have a very hard time being in the moment. I'm an escape artist. Ha. There is no have done, will do, might have or should have. There is only what is.
Love this philosophy of living. Difficult to master, but a worthwhile state of mind.

[Willard Wells]

If you already love yourself this is not as important. But if you cannot accept and love yourself, you have to start with just a moment. Thanks for the review.

[Shae]

I like this a lot. Recently I feel so eager to get the career I want and to have my whole life together in an instant . I rarely savor the moment at 22. Thank you for this reminder and ofcourse nice work!

[Willard Wells]

Well some people have had things happen in their lives that they only see hate when they look in the mirror. You cannot move forward in life until you love yourself. This is meant to point out that just a little daily positive for yourself, you can hopefully regains a positive view of your life.

I appreciate your taking time to read my words and commenting.

[Riddhi]

Really nice poem..I really liked your thoughts and the way you carved them in this poem..And yes it is true that neither past nor future is in our hand..I enjoyed reading it..Keep it up and Thanks for sharing...

[Willard Wells]

I appreciate the kind words and taking time with my work.