Down The Hole, What A Ride

Fun Work, If you can get it. It pays the bills

In the reality of this place,

within the darkness of my mind
I got a call, from a gal,
to follow a lead.

Her name was Alice,
she was a “Dame”
She said down that rabbit hole,
it would be fine, not insane.

So I followed her
down the hole that night,
then she gave me a funny hat,

but that was cool.
As I, was watch'in her fine a*s.

She said to me
that hat you wear
makes you fit right in.
I took her word, strutt'in style,

Of the cool cat's pipe!

I did partake, damn
that chick was right,
it's quite a place,
to take a ride, most any night.

I'll go again, but not so soon,
since it's a scary ride.
Down a real dark hole.

I don't know if I'll get out again.

Reviews

[Jess]

What an imagination! Very well written!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you, Jess. Just a couple ideas that kind of came together. Appreciate you reading my work.

[B. Boileau]

Sam Spade meets Alice ? What a great concept ! You HAVE been there have'nt you ? Your fine writing is my reading pleasure !

And yes Alice's a*s is fine !

bill

[Willard Wells]

Apparently I missed this and I am sorry. Thank you for you kind words and you time reading my work.

[David Scott]

Fun read. A little spastic, thus appropriate to the subject. The truth of it is we will follow, we have followed, and no matter the consequences we will choose to go there again.
Might as well wear the hat... We are all a bit mad anyhow.
BTW... You might need some sleep. :)

[Willard Wells]

I had some sleep but the shadow is coming back and now I see how far down the rabbit hole I may go tonight to avoid the fate of all that pain around my face.

Thank you so much for taking time to consider my words. In all reality, considering the conditions I write sometimes and you say spastic, we are lucky the word even go on the same page.

Luck be with me as I play and dance in the darkness of my rotating mind.

Thank you again for your visit and kind words and if the facts were told I;m for sure not near as far out on the edge as you may read into my words. But I do so much like playing at the cutting edge.

[David Scott]

I make no such assumptions. The creativity and intellect are vivid still.
May I ask what you suffer from physically?

[Willard Wells]

Well mostly it's just headaches that can run for a few minutes to a few weeks. In recent years it does not go weeks. Just a few hours or a few days. I limit my medication which keeps me on the edge of having or not having, but it seems to be a safer and a more controlled place. I like to keep my faculties intact most all the time. I can stand a little pain. Peace out.

[David Scott]

You have my sympathies. In 2000 I was having constant migraines. I had a major surgery and it actually fixed the issue. So I can relate, but no longer suffer from the headaches. I hope you can find a cure...

[Willard Wells]

But it appears to be my writing friend. Not a nice friend. 😃

[andrew mitchell]

This had a feel of fantasy laced with reality when her name was Alice. I felt like you were being lead astray lol, having a sexual tone on reading as soon as you said nice a*s.:) Nice work!

[Willard Wells]

It seemed to be part "Alice through the Looking Glas". Since the truth of the story lies in the mind of the traveler in an altered state. It was Roger Rabbit works for Alice and what a night.

I am glad you enjoyed the excursion within my mind on a fun filled trip. Must be that goofy side.

In reality I am doing very well and just having fun with words and ideas.

Thanks for the visit and playing along.

[andrew mitchell]

As I do playing with words to tease the reader lol. Alice was the buxom redhead with Roger Rabbit. Even cartoons have festive fun:)