Island Girl End

Final part of Island Girl Series

As young men oft' do,

with thoughts of

places far away and love.

Places seen,

viewed from another

camera eye.....

Sometimes, still;

yet, often moving,

the image of

a beach bums life.

Many years

have passed

thinking back

to dreams of life,

the wishes of youth.

Turning my head to rest.

Finding it all,

in Island Girl

of my dreams.....

laying next to me.

Reviews

[Melissa Lynn Keeling]

This is brilliant and fantastically sweet! Best wishes to you both.

[Willard Wells]

There were 3 or 4 pieces in the series and I held this one back a bit thinking another Island Girl poem would come, but alas it has come to an end.

Thank you so much for visiting my work and commenting.

[Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ..]

Hail Poet Willard Wells!

Your Quill flies in safe speed, and scan the Universe's wonders.

I like the way You paint with words.

May You enjoy a long healthy creative life!

In reverent appreciation,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

[Willard Wells]

Again my thanks for visiting and commenting on my work. I have only read the one piece you have up and I will admit now that longer pieces challenge my brain to read often. I look for more works by you, but as for now your poetic praise will have to appease my curiosity. Peace Out.

[Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU]

You are welcomed Sovereign Poet.

May Your Quill fly in altitude high.

[Willard Wells]

I bow to your Quil kind Poet.

[Workvio]

A very sweetly romantic piece that undoubtedly put a few feathers in your cap, and a spark in your love life ... That is, if she has read this piece of your heart penned to page ... If not, you are failing to use the tools of life and love that God above has given you ... Very enjoyable and well done ...

[Willard Wells]

Well my love does not always understand my writing and explanation is needed. English falls to her 4th or 5th language and english is not an easy language to understand. Thanks for the read and comments.

[Firebird]

That's sweet. I'm glad you found the girl of your dreams. :-)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your words and I am glad I found her too. My life is complete and happy.

[Firebird]

:-) Stay happy. Best wishes.

[Calamityofgin]

As a gal with father issues that would leave Freud feeling like he had been kicked in the head by a donkey...
I can honestly say, i find older men quite sexy. No island gal..but id lay in the sand with you. If you are smart..funny..and a poet. Sapiosexual Ho me!!!.lmbo
But its true.

Great piece...
Thoroughly enjoyed!!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much young lady for your kind words and taking time to read my words.

As for Freud, I feel he had a number of his own issues that seem to push him off the rails to some degree.

[Calamityofgin]

Lol, surely. Siggy was a coked out trip. A Jungian mihself. Though right now i'm reading the collected works of dear ABBY. Teehee 💋

[Richard🖌]

Excellent Free versing, Willard, and such vivid imagery and enjoyment is expressed through your skillful pen.
I am curious enough to consider going back to read through and review your Island Girl series, if they are anything near as excellent as this finalé … which I have very much enjoyed.
Techy stuff: I noted a few line-breaks are in rather awkward places and punctuation oddly inserted or missing, a bit too many filler "and" words, and wondered if you've any interest in pursuing a bit of critique. V4L4, make it "passed".

Whatever, you know we share a love for Island Girls, eh? ; )
Thanks a zillion, Willard, for sharing the end (or, is it?) of your Island Girl romance! ⁓ Richard

[Willard Wells]

Yes this one does have some odd breaks and punctuation issue. Always open to ideas and you always have very well thought out suggestions. Thank you for your kind words and comments.

[Richard🖌]

I'll address it for you in messaging … see ya there! : )

[Richard🖌]

Nice edits you've made, Willard … good choices!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful end to an enthralling series...
I am going to miss your mysterious island girl, Mr. Wells!
I especially loved the last stanza!
Enjoyed the whole series!

[Willard Wells]

I held this one back for a number of weeks to see if another poem presented itself. As of this day I have moved to the conclusion and yet I also want more. Thank you for your kind words and comments.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are very welcome. :) the island girl must be happy for the way she was kept as a mystery to the readers till the very end.