Chocolate Chip

Chocolate Chip

A Poem by Willard Wells
"

Playing and baking

"

Milk, semi and white

flour, sugar, eggs and then beat

yum cookie taste treat

© 2015 Willard Wells


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My favorite cookie-unbaked or baked!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Willard Wells

8 Years Ago

yes, yes. I keep reading that raw cookie dough is hot good for you, but many things are bad, so mode.. read more
Took me a moment to cotton on to the "semi and white", but the title IS chocolate chip! In this senryu you have a cookie taste treat before baking! Reminds me of my childhood when the raw cookie dough was all the rage. To make it even more amusing, you could have your subtitle something like "Don't forget to bake them!" instead of "Playing and baking". Or your last line could be "Bake. Cookie taste treat!" Or leave it the way it is and see how many people remind you that you haven't baked your cookies; that could be fun. Either way, this is a tasty little morsel.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Well I expect I will leave it and I went with the presumption that they got cooked. It was a goofy i.. read more
Use the mini chips if you can find them...they make a better cookie! Ok, now I want one! ; (

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Only use Ghirardelli chocolate for my cookies and I don't know if they have mini's. Thanks for stopp.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

Ghirardelli IS the best!

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Added on October 18, 2015
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Willard Wells
Willard Wells

Sacramento, CA



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Photography and words are my activities to try and keep an over active mind under control. For the most part my pieces have been short since that's how I'm wired. I would like to write something longe.. more..

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