Caibiran Girl

Just observing the world

she's easy to spot,
long dark hair,
eyes like dark 
pools of chocolate.

skin with the 
softness of silk,
with ruby red lips,
that beg to be touched.

she walks the shore
beside the sea.
stealing all the 
beauty there is to see.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Not observing the 'world' you were to busy eyeing the girl to notice the other scenery around you. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Some beauty is so great that it distracts from all around you. Thanks again for your words and time in visiting my work.

[Valentine]

Just poking a little fun about a "man thing." My husband always seemed to say he was looking at her long hair!!!!!!!!! Kathie

[Willard Wells]

Of course it's a man thing. hahaha

[Autumn Lyric]

you have painted a very beautiful picture here with your words. Your observations were well put, I must say... :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for taking time to visit my words and comment. I am always observant of the most beautiful species there is, "Woman".

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Your words are so alive that I easily saw that beautiful girl walking down the shore, enjoying the serenity and propagating such lovely vibes to induce admiration from the onlookers.
Lovely write!

[Willard Wells]

Thanks for the time and comments. Greatly appreciated.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Perkele.7885]

Man you are hooked, just like me! I have always loved the Asian beauty and how it reflects in a mirror when embraced in the arms of a Caucasian none other than me!

[Willard Wells]

Sorry but you have to share. All that beauty is not just for your my friend. Thanks for stopping by to try and steal my girl.