Sublime

A Word

read the word sublime

considered it for sometime

realized it's you

Reviews

[R Smith]

you got this style just right I think Will, this is like a love song in 3 lines, it's beautiful :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Richard. It did come together better than expected.

[Valentine]

Very good. I think mastering this type of a write takes patience. Kathie

[Willard Wells]

If it takes patience I am in trouble. I have not patience. These are 15 minute writes at the most. I have not idea why these work for me, but they seem too. Thanks for the kind words and stopping by.

[Not here]

i really liked this willard :) your short poems like this are so powerful

[Willard Wells]

Thank you young man I appreciate the kind words and your stopping by to say heh.

[Perkele.7885]

are you saying this about me? really? go on now? really damn ! Will! I am, humbled!

[Willard Wells]

WOW, you must be smokin some really good s**t. hahaha. funny guy. I like it. NOT!! Thanks for stopping by my friend.

[Not here]

your profile pic, Perkele.7885. lol

[Perkele.7885]

I like to make you laugh, Will. People don't smile or laugh enough anymore.

[Willard Wells]

I agree Raj. Need more smiles and laughs.

[mattavelli]

This is a sweet one, Willard.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you kind sir. I greatly appreciate your time.

[SleeplessVolcano]

loved this!

It is as if truth sometimes takes a while to manifest, but when it does, it hits hard!

:D

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for your time and commenting. Greatly appreciated.

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:) could not keep from smiling...great observation and comparison in perfect senryu form, Willard...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much. Back to my normal speed writing. hahaha. I appreciate the reading of my words and commenting.

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haha, you are welcome!