Light of Life

Beautiful Day

Sun dropping on the horizon,

light fading as the night over takes the light.

A gentle breeze reduces the heat of the day.

Sitting on the grass,

watching the sky turn from dark blue,

to black with the twinkle of stars.

My mind drifts in and out of dreams.

Thinking of you,

the light of my life.

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

Soft, beautiful..and romantic..

Well Done..

Great Photo................ Jazz

[Willard Wells]

Thanks you so much for your kind words. Photo Pacifica, CA. About 18 miles SW of San Francisco.

[J. J. Nightingale]

OH .. WOW... .................and You are welcome...

[Robert]

Nice Willard! I really like this piece and I like the last line. I have the light of my life with me.

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Robert. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Valentine]

This is such a soft and gentle read. Very well done. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much young lady. Your visit and words are appreciated.

[Perkele.7885]

Willard, I feel like you reached inside of me and wrote something I would have written had I gotten around to it. But, your version here, is like better then the one I had not thought of yet. And, more important still, yours is in the here and now! Great, wonderful poem.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Raj for your jubilant response to my words. It's greatly appreciated. And I am sure your work of this subject would be subblime.

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simple yet packed with such love and admiration...you capture a beautiful moment, Willard...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much. I usually do a write and I am done. This was at least a month old piece I had started and was able to complete today. No normal of me, but it got done. Appreciate the visit and kind words about my work.

[....................]

Ah, we all have pieces like this, Willard...like you, i usually write in a single setting, but every now and then we start a piece that takes a little longer to get around to finishing...you are welcome!