My Life

Love of my life

When I hear your voice

my heart skips a beat.

When I see your eyes

my breath is lost.

When I feel you near

my pulse quickens.

When I hold you close

my soul feels embraced.

When you are gone

my heart is empty.

When you are not seen

I gasp for air.

When you are far away

my pulse is weak.

When I cannot hold you

my soul is empty.

I LOVE YOU!!

Author's Note

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Willard this has sad undertones of not only dependency but also deep devotion.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you John. Just saw your post. Must have been traveling in my mind the last few days. Thanks for stopping in and for the kind words.

[Roland Petrov]

This list of clichés actually works! The repetition keeps it flowing, and you have a strong contrast between the person being near and being gone.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for taking time to view my words and commenting. Greatly appreciated..

[Insight "MH"]

Beautiful emotions all mixed to create this fine piece.

Insight.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your time with my words and commenting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, these are definitely all the symptoms of love...real love, not just words on a page...

so expressive, this is.

[Willard Wells]

Jacob thank you for stopping by and sharing your kind words on my work.

[Perkele.7885]

I came by again to feel some no/cal romance. Is it a day for love there today?

[Willard Wells]

It's always a day for love wherever you are. As long as your heart is there. May you find romance and peace wherever you are today. Peace out my friend. Thanks for stopping by.

[Philip Muls]

Feels very authentic. Simple but real. No doubt you experience what you write. i like it Willard.

Could you read mine. Thanks.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for stopping by to view my words and comment. Happy to review your work since you have been here.

[AaronFreitas]

That is as romantic and beautiful as it get Willard. I hope to have a love like yours someday my friend :)

[Willard Wells]

And I hope for you to find the love of your life. Thanks for the visit and commenting on my work.

[B]

That is rather sweet
I would be liking at this stage
Love would be to me when he just get on my nerves but i just dont want to get away
he suffocates me but i want another kiss
he comes close i wanna run the hell away

you know the coocoo stuff lol

[Willard Wells]

Love is strange as they say and we just have to take it as it comes. It is hard to control and manage.
Thanks for taking time to review my words and comment.

[A. Amos]

I think the song goes best with this poetry...when a man loves a woman by Bryan Adam.

[Willard Wells]

I choose this one since it has a line of "I Love You" which fit the finish of my work. Your selection I am sure will at some point find a place in my work. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend...

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ah, such beautiful words, my friend...and such an apt song to accompany them...beautiful, Willard

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your comments and time in reading my works. Appreciated.