Wet

Wet

A Poem by Willard Wells
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Rain

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falling from the sky


moisture that seems lost in drought


just makes me giddy

© 2015 Willard Wells


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Great contrast between feeling giddy at all too rare moisture from the sky and the fact that it won't do anything to lessen the drought. Haiku seems to be your comfort zone, and so far I've liked them all.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

I do seem to wander the short verse. I may, be afraid of the long verse. Huumm. Giddy was the feeli.. read more
I can relate to this feeling my friend... I know that feeling all too well :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Welcome Aaron, one of us has missed the other lately I feel. Or after I leave you can say, his memor.. read more
Unfortunately it isn't raining much here Willard. I am afraid we may face a severe water shortage in the coming days. :( A nice write btw

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Hopefully one of us will get rain soon. Thanks for commenting.
It's raining, it's pouring.....
Glad to see your getting rain. The giddiness could be from gasses released to create that unique scent of water on parched earth...lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

The rain was so short the smell did not arrive. Just a tease. Thanks for commenting.
JayceeC

9 Years Ago

The one or two drops on the windshield kind? What a disappointment. Hope you get to sing in the rain.. read more
I remember one time it hadn't rained in so long that as the drops got close to the ground they turned to a fine mist and disappeared all together.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

As I recall they call that non measurable rainfall. We now are having dark clouds day after day, bu.. read more
I've always loved rain and look forward to it, provided there's no flooding. I can see why someone would be giddy over it. Nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit and comments. Greatly appreciated.
Relic

9 Years Ago

No problem.
Thinking about you feeling giddy makes me want to bust out all over! A nice poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Just wish the rain was more so the feeling could have grown to down right happiness. Thanks for stop.. read more

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Added on September 14, 2015
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Willard Wells
Willard Wells

Sacramento, CA



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Photography and words are my activities to try and keep an over active mind under control. For the most part my pieces have been short since that's how I'm wired. I would like to write something longe.. more..

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