Dreamland (Senryu)

Words for absent love

Dreamland

wishing you sweet dreams

as your sleepy eyes close tight

drifting to dreamland

Reviews

[Valentine]

Wonderful write, and each line fits. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment.

[Ben Noah Suri]

Nice.... Dreamland has all poets as its citizens.... Nice wishes for a peaceful sleep expressed in a sweet and short fashion.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you kind Suri for you words.

[....................]

a simple yet beautiful senryu, offering wishes of sweet dreams from the heart...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for taking time to read and comment on my work.

[....................]

my pleasure, Willard!