Goodnight II (Senryu)

Another night away from my love

good night my princess

may you have beautiful dreams

drifting among clouds

Reviews

[mattavelli]

This is a sweet one, Willard.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you my friend. Appreciate the kind words.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Awwww, so very lovely. :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for taking time to review my work. It's all about love.

[Perkele.7885]

This is good, you are the Letterman of the evening Senyru! Nobody does it better. You should feel sad for the rest. Nobody does it, quite the same as you.....Will, your the bestest!

[Willard Wells]

You praise me a bit much my friend. It is appreciated, but 'Bestest"?? hahaha

[KWP]

maybe she doesn't want to drift - maybe she wants to go adventuring in the amazon and fight a mighty python or something?

Love is strong - duly felt X

[Willard Wells]

Not this one. She might go somewhere other than clouds, but I doubt any kind of conflict or fight. She is a gentle creature that helps calm the beast in me. And does a pretty good job of it.