Dance of Love

Dance of Love

When you gaze upon me,

What do you see?

Where do your eyes go?

When you hold my hand,

What do you feel?

Where do you guide me?

When you lay close to me,

What do you imagine?

Where do you see us?

When you see me go,

What do you desire?

Where will we meet again?

When you see me on my return,

What have you missed?

Where do we go from here?

Author's Note

It came to me and it's new for me.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

So many questions and really in every relationship, the answers are different. I am not sure they can even be answered. It is the dance of romance that answers the questions. I liked this. Lydi**

[Willard Wells]

thank you so much Lydi, it was an experiment for me and I was happy with the results and I am happier that you enjoyed it. Appreciate your time with my work. Always.

[Entranced]

when you read my poem,
What do you think?

I read it with a single breath, really catchy and simple, yet transmitts a lot feelings. It is not always easy to know intuitively how your beloved one feels about you. I think the poem is about the missing gap in relationship and desire to get the old feelings back. I really enjoyed it!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for taking time to read and comment on my work. I will be checking your work soon.

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it is a dance, indeed... these are questions we ask ourselves and those we love, when relationships begin to bloom... we want to know that we and the other person are loving the right things and there for the right reasons...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your comments on my work. Appreciate it. :)

[sereenaoutloud]

This is really beautiful, contemplating what the other person is feeling and seeing when with you..are they missing you when you are gone? Very relatable question i think we all ask and would love answered!!
Great write!! ..

[Willard Wells]

A check list for a new relationship or maybe just checking on an old one. Thank you for reading and commenting. I am so happy you enjoyed it.