Her

Walking hand in hand

Looking into her dark brown eyes,

Reflecting sunlight from the sky.

Glowing skin under shining orb.

To have her gaze upon me with her eyes,

So bright in this day's shining light.

As she steps close, her skin so soft.

I melt from her gaze,

As she takes my hand,

And we stroll along the boulevard.

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

This is very nice Will! You love the words, orb and boulevard!

[Willard Wells]

Yet and I have used orb a lot lately. It seems to be my word of the month. Thank you for your time and comments.

[Tai Chi Italy]

You capture the ease of the relationship beautifully in three equally sensual stanza's! You know your romantic. A pleasing read with charming finesse. Smiling at you, Tai

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Tai, never turn down a smile. Yes I am a romantic and all my words are true. Thank you for visiting and commenting.

[KWP]

another moment wrapped in the most beautiful of love ... X

[Willard Wells]

Sorry young lady but I am a romantic and I love deeply. I told my love she is my muse as I expect close to half of my work comes from my moments with her or when missing her. Thank you for your kind words and commenting.

[KWP]

That's very nice of you to call me young :-) hehehe X

[Willard Wells]

Everyone is young after me. hahaha

[Lydia Shutter]

Splendiferous romance! Heavy sigh. Lydi**

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Lydi, I am a romantic and in love.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful romantic poem, Willard. Like it very much. :) Rudi

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Rudi. Appreciate your time and comments.

[R Smith]

wonderful poem Will, pure love throughout :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Richard. Words of love are with me all the time as I am with the right one.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You seem to reflect such adoration in these writes Willard that makes it impossible to see it other than real love expressed. One small detail in stanza two, line two you use bright twice, perhaps you might have replaced the first with 'Shining in this days bright light'?

[Willard Wells]

Thanks John and I will look at that. I cannot say it about this piece but I changed another piece for the same reason and it seems to be liked but the word flow is flawed. I can see the change in this one.

[Chirag Kumar]

Wonderful imagery Willard. Lovely :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Chirag for your time and you comments.

[Perkele.7885]

You rolling again, Will!
Line 3 small 's' for skin

[Willard Wells]

Thank you I need a proofer really bad today. Thank you for covering and your time.