Summer Solstice (Haiku)

California Dry

solstice sun burns hot

scorching earth dawn to dusk

moisture sucked from earth

Reviews

[Nolo Segundo]

You know the essence of haiku-- well done

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much. I like them and strive for them. Very few I have done come this close to form. Appreciate your time in reading my work.

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great imagery in this Haiku, Willard... well-done

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your time and comments. It's greatly appreciated.

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my pleasure!

[Sharon Kim]

Great Haiku! you can really get a sense of heat and dryness. One suggestion-because a haiku is so short, I was wondering if you could switch up burning so you didn't have two variations of the same word. Maybe you could use blistering or scorching. Just a thought! Nicely done!

[Willard Wells]

Well I did give it consideration but it never came to pass since the word was different. But with a little time and your thoughts I will revisit it. Thank you so much for your kind words and visiting.