Out of Body

What is my View

Mind traveling low in the weeds,

Watching out for low flying objects.

As I may perceive

Do not run with sharp objects during this phase they say.

Danger can be lurking as the mind is on a different wave.

I do try to remember.

But sometimes the action is faster from one side

Than the other of my brain

Then the place where your body seems to be.

How did I arrive at this state or is it state of mind,

An illusion or reality.

Standing to the side looking in on this view,

Of a life which while appearing surreal;

I feel it is quite real and nice.

So I think I will keep it for the rest of my life.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. Made me think this afternoon.
"Then the place where your body seems to be.
How did I arrive at this state or is it state of mind,
An illusion or reality."
Illusion or reality. Leave us with thoughts and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your time and comments about my work. It is greatly appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.

[R Smith]

a bit of astral projection Willard, can be a pleasant trip around the world and back and inspire such lovely work as this :)

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Richard for your time in reading and reviewing.

[R Smith]

no problem, always making time for good writing :)

[Perkele.7885]

Mr friend Will is having an out of his mind experience. Shall I call 911 or just give him a bicarbonate of soda and cod liver oil? hmmmmmmm? Fish oil will do the trick! I must save my poet!

[Willard Wells]

Now now Raj, this is my playground. Nothing to fear. Just crus'in along enjoying the view. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.