Perception (Senryu)

Morning Schedule

Penetration no

But too late as tip enters

Blood drawn slowly now

Author's Note

What that song? "Wasted Days and Wasted Nights". Yep

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Wow, so many ways to interpret this. It leaves much to the imagination. Well done!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment on my work.

[ANTO]

I saw a diabetic here having to rely on the needle to survive.

This also spoke to me of the blight of malaria and its blurring messenger the mosquito Will. I can see one of the little blighters now sucking its fill as we sleep - *shivers* - cant stand them about me.
Nice senryu - you have this form sooo down.

[Willard Wells]

I may have to take this little piece and play with it and maybe some mosquito's. I might of thought of that, but with the needle in my arm, it seemed the correct correlations. Thank you for reading and commenting.

[Marie]

I have no fear whatsoever of needles. They can penetrate all they want.
I remember the song, and almost the artist.
Why did you give this an "M" rating?

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Marie and the rating was for the puritans that may be floating around. I marked one this way last week and then changed it back. Just being safe I guess.

[Willard Wells]

I changed it.

[AaronFreitas]

Nice wording my friend... for me a definitely don't like needles and the thought of it gives me the chills lol

[Willard Wells]

Well it was on my mind more since I took my time so not to be rushed and no coffee, food etc. So the lines not bad and I see three people doing draws so no problem. Yah right. 50 minutes later. OMG. Thanks for feeling the pleasure of the liquid surging up through the needle and into the vial and then the "Oh wait we need one more".

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha you have a needle phobia Willard! I guess we all hate them.

[Willard Wells]

No phobia. When I have pain I am the guy that says skip the pills and give me the big Steroid shot to ease the pain faster. Shoulder, knee, neck, back, soul of foot. Hell I'm a damn pincushions.