The Draw (Senryu)

Blood Morning

starving with no food

needle prick so blood may flow

now I get to eat

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Being an ex nurse this reads like someone doing a fasting glucose test lol! But still a good senyru Willard as it flows with emotion and a message.

[Willard Wells]

Well John, you got it. I wrote this as I waited for my blood draw for fasting panel of test. I like to take daily mundane life actions and write sometimes and this was it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It makes good poetry to take ordinary life as the paint.