Demon (Senryu)

where do they find you

dark day dreams or just nightmares

never close your eyes 

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Ominous and haunting. I like your style.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for taking time to review my work. It is greatly appreciated.

[andrew mitchell]

A great dark piece Willard

[Willard Wells]

You seem to be catching my playground writings. Thanks for reading and commenting. I do have some funny stuff out there too. hahaha

[andrew mitchell]

They are great!

[AaronFreitas]

I like it... definitely a creative piece and they are never too far away... waiting for us to give them a chance to enter our lives :)

[Willard Wells]

They never leave my life, but I'm in charge for the most part. I like to think of it as keep your friends close and your enemies closer. And they are the enemy. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[E G TEN]

Hello Sir Wells, a bit of the dark side of you in here, although
I believe its a fail... writing on the dark side, because this is still beautifully enlightening! :-) :-) A wonderful Senryu you have here, Thanks for Sharing! :-)

[Willard Wells]

EG I responded to this hours ago, but apparently I forgot to click on "Post". Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It was not completely dark as I sit on the edge of the blade and don't lean to far into the darkness.

[R Smith]

Nice one Willard, yep those damn things just jump right into your head any time, like this a lot, i think its one of your best, that's best of a great bunch, bravo :)

[Willard Wells]

Richard thank you. I feel guilty when I don't put something up daily or every other day. And when in need I go to short verse. Greatly appreciate the visit

[Perkele.7885]

Why Will, you did a poem about my ex-wives! You sly dog! How much did they all pay you? That last line is sure the truth. That is when # two and her boyfriend stuck a knife in my back.

[Willard Wells]

I work free for demons. I give them bad advice. I wrote this to try and add some bite and from what you tell me, I think I got it. Boyfriend and wife, funny stuff. Been there, done that. hahaha Thanks as always my friend. Have a great evening.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Great advice. If only it were possible. They plague even when your eyes are open. This has foreboding like a Stephen King novel!

[Willard Wells]

I agree that for many closer your eyes is not an escape. But the words worked. Hahaha. Thank you for your read and commenting.