Dark Hallways (Senryu)

Evening Stroll

taking Excursion

down the hallways of my mind

it's dark but all mine

Reviews

[marcus]

I liked this! A dark journey into the deepest recesses of our minds..

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Markus, this one to me feels like I'm skipping down the hallways. Fun and joyous in a darkened way. I appreciate the visit.

[andrew mitchell]

Loved this Willard. a great write

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Andrew. Your words and visit are appreciated.

[AaronFreitas]

Nice words my friend! Sometimes it doesn't matter what we have as long as it's ours to have :)

[Willard Wells]

Exactly. People often have more than they realize and once that take control of what they have, a better life will follow. Thanks for the read and comments.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand the poem. Sometime all we have left is the dark hallways. Must find new reasons to be alive. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words and reading my work. It is greatly appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.

[JayceeC]

Well there are occasional flashes of light and beauty in that mind too, Willard. But it's nice to own the dark places too.

[Willard Wells]

I own all the places good and bad, but I will control or as controlled as well as possible. My love keeps me in the right place for the most part. Thanks to you for your travels within my mind. :)

[JayceeC]

Love has a way of turning on the lights..maybe they just remember to change the lightbulbs

[Alfred Kukitz]

There is nothing like a good bit of darkness walking with you in the night.

Regards,
Al

[Willard Wells]

Once you realize their your demons and your darkness, it's play time. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

[....................]

without leaving our chairs or beds we can stroll through those hallways and eventually we have to walk the dark ones for they are all a part of us... well-written, Willard.. i enjoyed this stroll!

[Willard Wells]

Yes FT we do have dark hallways and they are accessible to some and fun, but for others it is so dark they can never see the light. We are fortunate that we can hang on the edge and hopefully not slip to far. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[....................]

My pleasure, Willard...

[Perkele.7885]

When are you coming back?
This is a nifty little number you have offered up to your readers today
line #1 Excursion should be a small "e" I'll wager

[Willard Wells]

Well I capitalized it and then said fI(**, I will just leave it for now. I always come back, but I do seem to take a daily inventory of my files. Appreciate the review.

[R Smith]

now that is great, i've got a mind just the same lol, needs a strong torch, love this Senryu Willard its a little gem :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Richard. I always take time to dance in the hallways with the demons that guard my past and memories. Appreciate the review.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Funny how we can take refuge in our heads, especially when out walking in the countryside. Nicely expressed in seyru Willard

[Willard Wells]

Thank you John. Appreciate the time and words. Have a great day. Or in your case, afternoon and evening.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you; you too.