My Everything

Breathing is labored

Heart races rapidly

Eyes dilated

Lips dry

She makes my heart beat

Lungs fill with air

Every moment without her

Breathing stops with anticipation

Looking to the next moment

That she is near

So I can inhale her scent

And behold her beauty

Longing to hold her

Look into her eyes

      Kiss her lips

     Lay next to her

She is my life

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Beautiful. BeaUtiful. This has a nice style and wonderful flow. You were Inspired when writing and it shows. You keep outdoing yourself

[Willard Wells]

Now if I just understood how it happens. Thank you JC for your reading and commenting. I thought it would work and it felt good when done.

[JayceeC]

You're not supposed to understand how. .just the why. It comes from a soft flowing place within so nice flowing piece.

[Perkele.7885]

I could have written this WILLARD
my style my lay out, my font,,,need I go on, it has to be good

[JayceeC]

Lol..so you now own a font and center justification. ;-p
actually does look a bit like your work with tighter lines.

[Willard Wells]

Well thank you Raj. You know what they say about coping. The formating is so limited. I played with it a number of times and in the end this was it. I like the final shape of the full work considering the topic. As always your words are appreciated.

[Perkele.7885]

you are a sly dog. I gotta watch you!