My Everything

Breathing is labored

Heart races rapidly

Eyes dilated

Lips dry

She makes my heart beat

Lungs fill with air

Every moment without her

Breathing stops with anticipation

Looking to the next moment

That she is near

So I can inhale her scent

And behold her beauty

Longing to hold her

Look into her eyes

      Kiss her lips

     Lay next to her

She is my life

Reviews

[Jen]

Beautiful poem written in tribute to your love, nothing more romantic!

[Willard Wells]

I would write one for her daily if I could find the words. Of course we have language issues and she does not completely comprehend some of my work. I have to go over some of it by line and explain. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work.

[R Smith]

well said Willard, a fine tribute to your love and the passion clearly runs deep, the intimate moments are described beautifully, great writing my friend :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Richard. I appreciate your reading and commenting.

[Tom McRoberts]

Such an intimate piece. Zoomed in on your own anatomy, showing us not expressions of love--but the feeling. Great write, Willard!

[Willard Wells]

Tom I appreciate the kind words and reviewing my work. I am glad you enjoyed.

[Not here]

very vivid and sweet :) i like this

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Dante. Appreciate your visiting and commenting.

[Destiny Dreamer]

So strong, beautiful and True feelings. Romantically described. Enjoyed reading it :)

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Dreamer, I appreciate your reading and commenting.

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are welcome :)

[AaronFreitas]

This is a powerful and beautiful write... you are truly blessed to have a love like that :)

[Willard Wells]

Yes I am my friend and if she slow down long enough today I will read this to her. Thanks for the review.

[Melinda McQueen]

What a great poem of love.
Expressive and powerful.

[Willard Wells]

Melinda thank you for your kinds words and for stopping by to read my work.

[Chirag Kumar]

Excellent poem Willard. From the flow of the poem to its content, everything is awesome. Loved it :)

[Willard Wells]

Kumar thank you again for reading and commenting on my work. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and gentle words for lone my friend.
" Longing to hold her
Look into her eyes
Kiss her lips
Lay next to her"
I liked the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


She is my life

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Coyote. Every night and morning with my love I always am so happy to be next to her. I guess it is just inspired because of her. She has not heard this one yet.

[Coyote Poetry]

She will like it and you are welcome.