Loves View

Name change from "Our Views"

If I were you

And you were me

What would I see

What would you see

Would you see

My love for you

Each day

Every minute of my life

Would you see me

My love as I see you

Each Day

Every minute of your life

Would we both see

My love the same view

Each day

And minute of our life

Future is clear

My love, with the same view

Each Day for life

I give my love to you

Author's Note

Name change from "Our Views"

Reviews

[Shae]

Very beautiful, you're quite a romantic .

[Willard Wells]

No argument from me as I am a big romantic. And a big softy. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work.

[Scarch]

Really felt and expression came out in form of words.
Extremely touching words. Believe me I am not boasting.

[Willard Wells]

thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate your taking time to comment on my work. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oh god... I am speechless. I have no words to describe how Heart-touching Poem this is. It made me kept reading. It's Amazing. These thoughts often came to my mind and You have captured and described it wonderfully. OMG! I wish I had written this, I wish, I wish. I am totally flattered by your this write. Totally AMAZING. Love it to depths. Really felt it. Keep writing. :) Good luck with more! Truly ENJOYED it!

[Willard Wells]

Such flattery. Thank you so much for reading my work. I am so pleased that you enjoyed this work. I will attempt to write more that can live up to your kind words.

[Destiny Dreamer]

I'd be very very Happy to read :) You are WELCOME!

[Perkele.7885]

I hope she appreciated your poem to her. It would have been better had you said these words to her and then taken her out for An A and W root beer Float!

[Willard Wells]

Well she is off today and hopefully I will have a chance to share a couple of these that I wrote her. Thanks Raj for reading and commenting