Awake

Morning sun peeks

Over the horizon

Dew drops cover

Blades of grass

Birds early morning Song

The rooster crows

Small creatures stir

As night owls sleep

Another night has passed

With moon

And stars

Crossing a darkened sky

Awake now

Humans of earth

Take count of your blessings

Blessing for eternity

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and good words.
"Awake now
Humans of earth
Take count of your blessings
Blessing for eternity"
Above lines are words to live by. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Willard Wells]

Thank you very much. It is greatly appreciated that you stopped by and read my work. I am glad my words worth while.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Willard.

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! Such a refreshing Poem. Beautiful. Love it! Truly enjoyed reading it! ^_^

[Willard Wells]

Dreamer thank you for reading and commenting. I am very happy you enjoyed it.

[Chirag Kumar]

A nice positive poem to start a day. Lovely :)

[Willard Wells]

As humans we tent to take the small things for granted. It is the little things that make life meaningful. Thank you for reading and commenting.

[sereenaoutloud]

such beautifully imagery in this write Willard such a pleasure to read!! :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for taking time to read my work and comment. It is greatly appreciated.

[Jen]

Beautiful poerty. Visuals are excellent! I enjoyed reading this, as it all flowed down from stanza to stanza. Great job!

[Willard Wells]

Jen, thank you so much for your viewing and commenting on my work. Very appreciated.

[AaronFreitas]

I enjoyed the descriptions Willard :) A good write!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Aaron. Your comments and reading my work is greatly appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Lizardo]

A good poem Willard, a really good poem that describes how we all wake up!
I think we all wish to wake up in bed sorrounded by fields of grass and trees while the sun peeks by the mountains. Ah beautiful scenery it is.
Great poem, I enjoyed reading this one a lot. I mind as well put it on my Ipod to read it when I wake up! lol
Anyways, I'm not surprised coming this good piece from you, as you are a great poet.
Thanks For sharing.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words Lizardo. I am glad you enjoyed it. I really appreciate your taking time to read my work and comment.

[R Smith]

that's lovely Willard, the birth of another day, another chance to thankful for the blessings we have in this life, always positive this poem is a delight to read, thank you :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Richard. Your words and comments are greatly appreciated.

[Perkele.7885]

Willard, try Rise and Shine as your last line.

[Willard Wells]

thanks Raj. Two ot the same suggestion. Guess I better review it hard. Thanks,

[JayceeC]

Willard, I like the tone of this...the early morning descriptions and details that make morning fresh! I'd work a bit on the closing line though. Perhaps something about opening eyes would work, because it will also layer the meaning of counting blessings...just a thought. Jan

[JayceeC]

This is a much better ending Willard!