Scent (Senryu)

Passion

    opium and musk

rapid breathing and heart rate

  command me I'm yours

Author's Note

Passion

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Opium perfume is my personal downfall Wilard. A scented senyru!

[Willard Wells]

Scents can start the mind on a very interesting and exciting trip with visions of loveliness of your past and hopes for the future. Sounds, Sights and scents can drive a man crazy. Thank you for your review and comments.

[AaronFreitas]

I love the way you use scent to feed off... good work!

[Willard Wells]

I had to play with the scents since one I was going to use had too many syllables. Thanks for stopping by and reading my work.

[Black Cat Fever]

Very nice and romantic. Fantastic job on this!

[Willard Wells]

Yes as a man I am easily controlled. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work.

[Black Cat Fever]

You are welcome.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...sounds like heaven to me! Scent is such a great navigator...good piece, Willard!

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Kelly. I had to try to put something out and scents were floating in the air and the issue was where to take it and I held back a bit and may venture further later. Thank you for reading and commenting.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...my pleasure!