Views (Senryu)

really its my life

say what you will about me

only my view counts

Author's Note

Life

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

Ahaan, great spirit, very inspiring work. Surely, only our views about our lives count. Wish I had written this one :)

[Willard Wells]

Everyone can write it everyday in their life by just taking control of their own life. Your taking time to read and comment on my work is greatly appreciated.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup U are RIGHT, absolutely I'll try the same topic :)

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Love the sentiment because it's true: nothing really matters beyond our view (that doesn't mean we haven't consulted the views of others first)... well-done (oh, may want to add an apostrophe in it's)...

[Willard Wells]

thank you and the apostrophe is not there since some of the reading i have done on Haiku and Senryu seem to suggest no punctuation etc. Still studying it as I see many variation. Some valid and some not so much. There may be a point where i add it back. These forms are very elusive in true form it appears. i appreciate your taking the time to view my work. it is appreciated.

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gotcha, Willard... you are far more studios than I :)

[Perkele.7885]

Now, that is the bread and butter of it, I'll say!
Home Run!!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Raj, a great light must have shined down illuminating my brain for just a brief fash, allowing me time to find this thought and put it down. I value you words and appreciate your reading my work.