She Ask

She ask what shall we do

As the rain

 Now falls

She ask what shall we do

 As the cold

   Settles in

She ask what shall we do

As the storm

   Rages on

She ask what shall we do

 As our life

 Slows down

She ask what shall we do

  As we grow

Older and frail

Each time I look into her eyes and share these words

Any day with you is like Sunshine Bringing love 

      To my life

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

pleasant and sublime i smiled through this

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for reading my work and for sharing the smile. I can ask no more than some emotion with my words and a smile is the best emotion I can give.

[Pixie Lotterbay]

it has a nice sound and is very touching

[Willard Wells]

Thank you kind one. I greatly appreciate your taking time to read my words. Touching tells me my feelings came through as my heart is truly in my work. Appreciated your stopping by.

[Alex Cook]

Very Nice. True love last through the ages.

[Willard Wells]

Yes and when we first met even not believing in past lives, I had to rethink that thought since we seemed to know each other instantly. Thank you for reading and your true words.

[Gee]

Nothing changes between life long lovers except the date and the depth of their love.Nice write WW

[Willard Wells]

Thank you your words and reading my work is greatly appreciated.

[Gee]

Your welcome

[Robert Vicens]

Hmmm... "She ask what shall we do" ... It sounds like she needs a strong leader and is without direction without her man. Was that intended or not?

[Willard Wells]

No, but if that works for you so be it. Thank you for reading my work.

[Willard Wells]

I thought about your comment after my response and wanted to explain this was me having in my head the last two lines. I did not know where the lines would fit or how I would get there. My intent was to get the line in here that I say to my love when she says what will we do because of whatever. So in hindsight it was reverse engineered. And fun.

[Riv]

It's simple, but that's what makes it sweet.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Lim for reading my work and it is greatly appreciated.

[Perkele.7885]

this is a very tender sweet write

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Raj. I did not care for it and put it out to see opinions. I will have to read my own work more. Hahaha

[Workvio]

A wonderfully, beautifully, magnificent and touching piece ...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words. I had a line I wanted to use and I did, but the whole piece just flowed rather strangely for me and so I am not comfortable with it yet.